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Its the spawning of the beast

with infections of yeast

that makes me weep

Its the drowning of my lung

under water so deep

this poem shouldn't be sung

Its the falling of the sky

from so way up high

This rhyme scheme doesn't work

I bet everyone at MT thinks I'm a jerk

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Originally posted by johndoe@Feb 5 2005, 05:23 AM

Its the spawning of the beast

with infections of yeast

that makes me weep

Its the drowning of my lung

under water so deep

this poem shouldn't be sung

Its the falling of the sky

from so way up high

This rhyme scheme doesn't work

I bet everyone at MT thinks I'm a jerk

:lol:

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Below looming pregnant milky walls, electrons of atoms of molecules of crumbled concrete dance windblown surfacewise, unnoticed alongside skin flakes, petrified black chewinggum mounds and miscellaneous detritus. She sits spreadeagled like a vacant marionette squiring little globules of coagulated blood from her Achilles

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Originally posted by NationalJazz@Feb 18 2005, 02:05 PM

Below looming pregnant milky walls, electrons of atoms of molecules of crumbled concrete dance windblown surfacewise, unnoticed alongside skin flakes, petrified black chewinggum mounds and miscellaneous detritus. She sits spreadeagled like a vacant marionette squiring little globules of coagulated blood from her Achilles

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The flow of time stops and goes

but the future drifting nearer knows

that the human spirit shifts and grows

with sorrowful days gone and past

we live our days until the last

and whne the final judgement comes

the human spirit dulls and numbs

the end of days we finally see

when our minds are all set free

 

 

ya i wrote that

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